Pinched,
warm fingers prod,
gathering fragility,
kneading emotions dough
risen,
beneath lions jaw,
dominated songs lament,
singing bus stop blues
pleasure,
charades in hollow promises,
addictions my soul can't shake
Author notes
Prompt: Long lost words whisper slowly to me
Still can't find what keeps me here
When all the time I've been so hollow inside
I know you're still there
Watching me, wanting me
- Haunted by Evanescence
(25-30 words)
A contest entry
- 10/25/30 Quickie.... just cause.... by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended May 28, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Some unique and creative imagery in there!! Excellent take on the prompt... the last stanza is my fav.. fab!
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Who's on a roll? YOU are hehe Great take on this. All the best of luck!!
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Great imagery and metaphor
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Very nice take... such a beautiful flow and lovely imagery... Well done.
Ken
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