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I Can Be Casper

 

 

I could disappear,

   float straight through

 

if I wanted to.

 

 

 

   I'd rather

 

be a Richie Rich.

 

 

 

  But,

 right now,

                  I feel like

 

 

I'm just me,

 

 

 here and

 

 

   where I need to be...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

                  

 

 

     

 

      

Author notes

I.C. Winner, option 2, per contest rules

A contest entry

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Comments


  • Penz gold member
    June 3, 2008
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    I expected something close to your writing when you chose that option and title. But I do wish you didn't put too many spaces, sometimes readers can get lost and they won't remember your poem. Instead they will remember the spaces.

    But nonetheless I admire your effort and I also wish you good luck in the contest