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Where my Love Lives

These words I have chosen up from this path far below,
from a cave hollow and dark, words I fear to let show.

 

Never before so consuming and finding me here,
I try to ignore it and push it away, temporarily in the clear.

 

Suddenly it hits me hard this ache so intense
spreading throughout, I have no defense.

 

It builds and it grows, suffocating my soul,
withering it begins so I call forth my control.

 

Take hold, grab it tight, pull it down with my might,
to the hollow empty darkness, where my love lives..

 

 

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  • badnovocaine
    December 28, 2008

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    Aw this was so perfect for the picture. I loved it. Sent a really powerful message and imagery. I loved how you began this poem left me wanting to read more. And I wasn't disappointed

    Thank you for entering.


  • pancake
    June 17, 2008

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    really strong and powerful. i really love it. really deep. absolutely stunning.


  • Quill Bill
    May 30, 2008
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    strong word, emotions hard to live with, and not worth living without.

  • hscopazzi
    May 28, 2008
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    I really liked...

    this one!! I like the flow.

    Keep it up!
    Harmony


  • FreshDaises
    May 28, 2008
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    WOW

    This is your best yet! I look forward to more!

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