Dark may be the world
But light is all I see
Surrounded by hardships
Weighing so heavily
Naked with honesty
Open with desires
Seeking to find someone
Who seeks what I aspire
The purest of intentions
Yet so hard to accrue
Someone with love to share
Whose heart is truly true
A contest entry
- Pic Inspired.... by MaMa-2-be-Cindy.
800 points, ended May 30, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very nice write, I love it ...mary
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wow... this is so beautiful and such\ a true poem!!! You did a great job on this one!!!!
Hugs,
beth -
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Thanks young lady! I hope it all comes true for you too!
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BREATH TAKING~
for as the heart of one does seek the heart of another, naked with honesty-and filled with purest intent...seekers of a love, truly true...Can i have my breath back now?
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A very deep and wel thought out piece on the picture, I quite enjoyed this
Loved this one the most --
Naked with honesty
Open with desires
Seeking to find someone
Who seeks what I aspire
Thank you and good luc
Cindy
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Thanks cindy. I enjoyed writing it!
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Such a nice take on the pic.
"Naked with honesty
Open with desires"
"The purest of intentions
Yet so hard to accure
Someone with love to share
Whose heart is truly true"
"Dark may be the world
But light is all I see"
Beautiful my friend!!
good luck with the contest
darlintlc
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a person who reveals a true heart is so hard to find... i try my best here to show mine as in real life i cant... (theyd all leave me thinking i was crazy oh yea i am) thanks for sharing and good luck in contest...!!!!!!!!!!!!
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wow
this is really good. i get what you mean
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