Starring though memories
of dark shadows
I question my sanity
wondering if I ever was;
whispers pleaded on dead air
~let it go
A contest entry
- Quickie!!! (dark) by Angelflower.
702 points, ended May 29, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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B EAUTIFUL!!!
This is so sad but through sadness one comes to realize they must move on and let go with those sad and painful thoughts and feelings.
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this was a wonderful poem for the prompt..
I love the emotion in this.. The almost despiration in your words.. You did a wonderful job..
Thank you very much for sharing this..
Best of luck..
Angel
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Good work, I doubt my own sanity to exist at times. A very good write, good luck in the contest.
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Wow.... just wow. I wish you luck!
~Kystal Angel
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Wow.. amazing imagery and brilliant thoughts in this!
loved the line "whisper pleaed in crimson air"
~Great write and good luck in the contest
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Oh yes.. I feel this sis! I question mine too sometimes and plead let it go...
Wonderful
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Excellent
Such a very deep take on this dark prompt. I like what you have done with it. Best of luck hun
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Ah, Words after my own heart, "I question my sanity
wondering if I ever was" how familiar this line seems. Best of luck to you ~Bret~
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