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Soul's Serenity

immerse with my soul's serenity
with gentleness and compassion

souls intertwined resisting death
embodiment of infinite peace

love interred for a lifetime
sharing everlasting immortality.

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"Let's bury ourselves in each other, until they bury us in a grave" - Mark (Cerulean Sunrise)

25 words of wonder

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  • penman gold member
    June 10, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Terrific choice of 25 words. So very well done. thank you for sharing


  • DarkHunter
    June 4, 2008
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    Is indeed 25 words of wonder, very beautiful and deep.


  • Errant Panther gold member
    May 28, 2008

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    very powerful voice in this poem, well written particularly in regard to the revival of some vocabulary that is often neglected here on AP.


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    May 28, 2008
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    Enjoyed reading this.


  • In Too Deep1
    May 28, 2008
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    forgot the elves~

  • In Too Deep1
    May 28, 2008

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    The compassion and forever love is so beautiful in this writ. Not all understand the bond between soul mates. Life is said to be empty of emotion when such a treasure is lost. Wonderfully penned and impressive message. An enjoyable read. Best wishes in the comp

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