Our casket of love,
built of thick dark oak,
holds strong against another weathered season.
Burried in velvet, maroon love,
we rise above deaths occasion.
Author notes
Prompt:
"Let's bury ourselves in each other, until they bury us in a grave"
Ughh... sorry, my grandpa passed today - sort of on that plane...
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie 20-25 words by Cerulean Sunrise.
475 points, ended May 28, 2008, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow that is a beautiful discription of death
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very beautiful! I am very sorry to here about your grandfather.
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Wow
Beautifully metaphorical..Sorry about your grandfather..
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Thank you
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This is great congrats on Silver love the background have a great day best wishes always
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Awww thanks for the congrats, hugs, hearts, applause and rose!! Teehee
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Congrats on a well deserved silver. You penned a beautiful writ
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Thank you so much
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This is beautiful. Congrats on the silver.
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Thank you dear!
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Great imagery
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Beautiful write. You have captured the prompt perfectly. Thank you for sharing this with us, also thank you for commenting on my write as well.
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Simply beautiful as always. I loved the movement, emotion and flow, as well as the message. A most enjoyable read. Best wishes in the comp my friend
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uh huh!
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Thank you for silver! I'm surprised - there were so many great pieces here! Thank you dear
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Wonderful poem
Loved your words especially the line Buried in velvet, maroon love.
Wish you well in the contest
Julie
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