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Bitterly Sweet Couple

Holding hands walking down the street
shouting insults at passerby
sweetly in love with ourselves and eachother

others want us in a grave

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Ah yeah I know wierd take

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  • Maybe.I.Am.Broken.
    May 29, 2008

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    swell right jade!
    Now I'm out of the 50's...
    I like this take on hte prompt! keep writing!

    ~Anie

    ♥♥♫♥♥


  • OnceUponAMind silver member
    May 28, 2008
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    Haha! YES! I love where you took this best of luck!

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    May 28, 2008

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    I think this is good. There is so much hate in this world and it is so hard to be who we are when others at like they are always right and the way we live is just wrong blah society sucks


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    May 28, 2008
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    wow

    lol

    neat