Hands clasped,
eyes locked,
we recall
passionate moments.
Fading away
we summon the energy,
just to whisper,
"i love you"
one last time.
- Together forever?
Author notes
20-25 words
"Let's bury ourselves in each other, until they bury us in a grave"
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie 20-25 words by Cerulean Sunrise.
475 points, ended May 28, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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aaawwwwwww this is soo sweet... i really like this... thanky ou for sharing this... good luck in contest...!
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Just like a little scene of a movie, I could sooo feel and envision this! Great write! Best of luck
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Aww awesome sis! I love this... sigh... so sad and beautiful at the same time!
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This is such a stunning take on the prompt. Very romantic with beautiful movement and flow. A most enjoyable read. Best wishes in the comp
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Lovely!
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