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running out of time

it didn’t have to be this way
but you choose not to stay
you left without a goodbye
didn’t even bother to tell me why

I opened my eyes
and you were gone
did I do something wrong?

I just wish you would call
because I can’t take the fall

I want to know why you just got up and left
leaving me to mend the rest

I feel so empty inside
have nothing left to do but cry

I just want to see you again
because I still want to be friends

but your gone
and I don’t know what to do

when you got up and left
you took my soul
and left the rest

the hurt, the pain
your just playing our childish game

I just don’t now what to do
cause every time I think of you
I keep on wishing this wasn’t true
but I have to realize
my hope is running out of time

childish game is the game of love thsi idea comes from one of my other peoms called childish game i guess you can say this poem is the story behind childish game

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  • Breathless Ballons
    May 28, 2008

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    wow, i love this so much. And love is a childish game, and it can suck, A LOT, sometimes.

    I really liked the rhyme in this, it was really enetertaining. Right when i started reading it I got "hooked".

    It portrayed plenty of emotion, and thats important in a poem.

    Ain't he cute??!!


  • VerminVomit
    May 28, 2008
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    love sucks