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Always Yours...

Your love is the warmth
that keeps my desire alive
passion and affection.
Until gray hair and wrinkles
Overtake us both…

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Prompt:
"Let's bury ourselves in each other, until they bury us
in a grave" - by Cerulean Sunrise

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  • carole21
    June 14, 2008

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    nice

    nice short expressive write for the prompt . . liked "your love is the warmth" and "passion and affection" . . devotion counts !!


  • crimsondew
    May 28, 2008
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    I understand this so well...right out of your heart...well written dear....many


  • Valley Girl silver member
    May 28, 2008

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    A sweet take on the prompt. Thank you for sharing also thank you for commenting on my write as well.


  • OnceUponAMind silver member
    May 28, 2008

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    Wonderful!

    Your love is the warmth
    that keeps my desire alive

    Love these lines Best of luck


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    May 28, 2008
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    Nice sentiments.

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