Jack Of All Trades

Jack of all trades
sheltered her heart
taking her away
deceit of fallen truths
lathered in lust
She gave up her life
to the forbidden street
She turned tricks for him
He killed her soul

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Bloody Feelings by ~bloody-london

A contest entry

35*35*3 Quickie!!!! *PIF* by SuicidalLover. 450 points, ended May 29, 2008, 7 entries
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daviscth
June 20, 2008

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I always skip over these kind of pictures because I can't find the right words. I can clearly see that you have no such problem!!!!! I enjoyed your imagery very much.

SuicidalLover
May 29, 2008

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Oh....wow. Talk about short and sweet to the point. This is great! Thanks for enterting.
~Kystal Angel

Rovingone
May 29, 2008

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Such a graphic poem. She must have been crushed. There are evil people in the world, who will destroy your body. (But, as they say, worry about the one who can steal your soul).

right now

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