Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

safeness

i am love
and you are me
together we will be eternity
safeness lies in your hands
and so is me

forever and ever will lie my heart
in your hands
that will not part
and will not break
this is were it is safe

my heart lies in your dreams
and you are my sanity

keep me safe
until the end

i am one
and you are too
and that equals
me and you

A contest entry

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 5 of 5

  • Folklor
    June 12, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    This was very nice thankyou for enteringthis was really heartfelt. I loved it. I particularly loved the way you always ended the lines with the two persona's togethr well done


  • luna-midnight gold member
    June 10, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    aww wow, this is very sweet, great write and good luck in both the contests
    take care
    stephanie


  • Breathless Ballons
    June 4, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    wow, wonderful job... once again!

    I just love this, so beautiful and true.

    Keep it up!


    -♥-


  • SuiCiDaLKiSs
    May 29, 2008
    Edit | Reply

    nice..

    sweet piece..good luck in my contest!


  • VerminVomit
    May 28, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    good luck in the contest

1 - 5 of 5