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~A New Start~

 ~A New Start~

I’ve drifted away on my own sweet cloud
Silence my partner…Apart from the crowd
Daydreaming of life’s future…Endless it seems
So much in store to fulfill my dreams
I once thought happiness was only with you by my side
Yet there is so much more in this world…Heart confide
I see the sun rays of beauty deep
The mountains are vast and I have restful sleep
No more worries…No more stress
I am free from my chain laden dress
Life moves on and so my heart
The time has come for a new start…
~By: Tanya~
~Written: May 28, 2008~

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  • Eternal Nightmare
    May 28, 2008
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    nice

    your poem is very nice,
    i enjoyed reading it,
    good job


  • Lexie
    May 28, 2008

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    i like you rpoem very nice flowing and enjoyable to read. many people would enjoy a new start, no more stress as you put it. great poem


    • Seductive Beauty
      May 28, 2008
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      You are so right.. Everyone would love a break and a chance to start over... I am glad you enjoyed it.. Thank you for taking the time to read it.. I appreciate it immensely...(smiles)...