Swirling Colors

Swirling, infusing
our bodies as one
Twisting, turning
our journey has begun

endless colors
bright and fair
lighting the night
with such tender care

as you hold me close
the rainbow glides down
we stand in the rain
our love was found

Swirling colors
embracing the sun
infusing our bodies
until they are one

Endless colors
Rainbow delight
feeling your love
by the night's candlelight

A contest entry

TELL ME WHAT YOU SEE by Whispering Wind. 500 points, ended June 11, 2008, 18 entries
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Whispering Wind
May 30, 2008

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rainbow delight, the purest kind...infusing bodies, nights candlelight...swirling colors, hearts becoming one...sighs...beautiful!!! niaish so much for sharing and entering

Rovingone
May 29, 2008

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What a beautiful poem! Such a picture, the infusing of love from one, and to the other. So romantic, and erotic at the same time, (without need for too much information).

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