These eyes,
spill dark secrets,
a venomous soul
lost in seas of evil.
Trembling,
I crash to my knees,
as this reflection,
reveals a satanic heart.
And though i try,
I cannot hide,
from myself.
Author notes
35 words:
Pic prompt.
A contest entry
- Quickie!!! (dark) by Angelflower.
702 points, ended May 29, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Again congrats to your gold sis! You are on a roll!!! You are in one of my contests right? LOL....3 for 3? Wonderfully penned!
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Congrats on gold hun.. this was amazing!
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Wow!!!! this is beyond wonderful!!!
You just blew me away with this.. Truly..
I am just struck speechless!!!
Bravo!!!
Thank you very much for sharing this..
Best of luck..
Angel
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omg i love this.... dark and wonderful....! i really liek this...... great job here..... thank you for sharing and goooood luck in contest...!!!!!!!!!
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I love it sister. A great dark deeply written poem. Facinating! I wish you luck.
~Kystal Angel
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Wow.. brilliant take in the prompt and so very original. Exploding with such deep imagery and emotion.. loved the ending "I cannot hide, from myself"
Isn't that the truth? No matter how hard we try, we can never hide anything from ourselves, our soul will find a way to break through the skin.
Awesome take on the prompt & good luck hun
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Nice. Very nice indeed
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Eekk... spooky!! When the darkness is ourselves, it's hard to hide from it!!
Brill!!
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Excellent job here ~Bret~
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Great take on the prompt! Great write as always! I wish you all the best.
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Such a chilling take on the prompt. Loved the movement, emotion and color in this dark writ. An enjoyable read. Best wishes in the comp
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