Watching through the eerie darkness of night
awaiting your arrival
It's appetite growing
with each passing moment
Patiently abiding it's time
to feed it's hunger from your soul
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie!!! (dark) by Angelflower.
702 points, ended May 29, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Now this is strong and powerful...the imagery is well done, leaves the reader with a eerie feeling...wonderful job...beauty in darkness for sure...
Best,
mystic
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Thank you
Thank you, this was a cool picture to write very eerie and dark with
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This was really creepy!! it freaked me out!!!
And I loved it!!! You did such a wonderful job on the prompt!!!
Thank you very much for sharing.. And best of luck..
Angel
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Thank you
Thank you my dear sister. sorry I scared you
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Ooh wow this was amazing.. such powerful imagery and expressions. Loved it! Good luck in the contest
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Thank you
Thank you so much for your wonderful comment.
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wow dark and awesome! Best of luck to you.
Linda
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Thank you
Thank you so much, this was a fun prompt to work with
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Such haunting words, beautiful. Wonderful take on this prompt. Best of luck to you ~Bret~
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Thank you
Thank you very much
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