Souls beg to be released,
as they hide behind one another.
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A crying wail is heard,
and we think it's a headache.
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These lost souls demand,
yet we stand solid, never wavering.
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Author notes
20-35 words
Dark picture Prompt - Unknown
A contest entry
- Quickie!!! (dark) by Angelflower.
702 points, ended May 29, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What to do in an insane world?
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This is very powerful. I like it x
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Very powerful words you have written...beautiful darkness with soft eerie flow...
Lovely!
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You did a wonderful job.. I really liked this hun..
You created a very vivid image.. Thank you very much for sharing.
Best of luck..
Angel
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holy cow this is freaking awesome.....! love ya twin... thank you for sharing this good luck in contest you
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Wow this was such a deeply powerful write.. amazing take on the prompt! Good luck in the contest
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Dark and deep, wonderful job on this. Best of luck to you ~Bret~
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Beautiful and unmerciful take on the prompt. A most enjoyable read. Best wishes in the comp
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