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Flame

Memories Come,
and memories fade,
but the love is eternal,
an everlasting flame,
of devotion,
of compassion,
of ever growing sparks,
That hold those memories constant and alive.

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  • wingsofgold25 silver member
    May 28, 2008

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    This is a really nice piece you got a lot of emotion and truths in so few lines.
    Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest