Kayla,
Why must you do this?
What has driven your lies?
Ever since the new year for the universe,
The truth has become scarce.
Does your spine not break at the words?
Do you not feel anymore?
Why Kayla?
Why?
Author notes
Option 3, word bank c and I.C. Winner
I wrote this for my friend whom's been changing since the new year. I pray for her.
A contest entry
- † Iron Poet † 3 by Penz.
450 points, ended June 5, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Can you replace the name Kayla with anyone?
Comments
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maybe you should talk to Kayla? People change in this world, and it's sad. Sometimes I feel I changed for the worse as well. But we should learn that not everything is permanent.
I like your write, truly personal. I wish you good luck in the Iron Poet! -
i actully really like this. it's tinged with such sadness, i can taste it. really excellent bit of work.
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