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This Poem Sucks

I can't sing and I can't rhyme
at all nor spell not get pucteration right
allmy words end up joined up together
and nothing tursn out right
My grammar and carpitel letter sare allmixed up
I think maybe i'm tired or something
But what the hek.. I'm useless great lump
And this poem sucks

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  • xcoldxtruthx
    June 20, 2008

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    Haha! nicee!
    it reminds me of this poem I read in english..
    here it is
    http://www.jameswhall.com/maybe.htm
    (u may have to copy + paste it)
    i like it!
    :]


  • AutumnsFlame
    June 5, 2008
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    Are the grammer mistakes there on purpose?... This is actually (believe it or not) not one of the worst poems I've read today. It was alright. It didn't really seem to stand out in the crowd to me though... it was okay. You may want to use some imagery or a metaphor... Thank you for entering my contest.

  • x-emo-gal-luvme-x
    May 28, 2008

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    no poem sucks and noone perfict, for somereason i feel emoction crying from the page, u did wel doin that