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Hope

Whistle, bone and root-stock starts
once again, lost in dust clouds of dogged grey
In a world of tempered glass and plastic reflection
my closest friends toil without waver now
My calm hands listen with tender steady
the focused heart-mind breathes fire
I search...I cry...we hope
If only I can purge an ounce of pain
if only for a moment of relief
seeking to place an answer
with the warmest of hugs I can give...

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  • Oya Ayaba Nikua
    June 2, 2008
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    I enjoyed the healing quality of this poem...we all need hope and a hug.


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    May 31, 2008

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    oh...and that has always been the way to know what needs to mend....the gathering of one aura to another.


    • Crowheart
      June 2, 2008
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      yes, the true blending of colours my dear.
      megweich for the bronze
      Im glad to see your still slingin words out here in the virtual.
      all the best
      dan


  • Night Hope gold member
    May 28, 2008
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    "my closest friends toil without waver now
    My calm hands listen with tender steady"

    Yes, of course you are a natural healer. An incredible voice poured smoothly as soulful waters flourish. Carol will love this. I know someone else who will, as well. Good luck in the contest, Poet. Wanda