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Tears of nothingness...


                       Salted tears,
    create pools of confusion.

                  Wading through

          oceans of memories,

                               I pray,


Knowing....
I can never bring you back.

 

 

 

 

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  • perfectsunset gold member
    May 28, 2008

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    Aww this was so deeply emotional, but a beauty shining from within.. A lovely take on the prompt.. good luck in the contest


  • xCandieKissesx
    May 28, 2008

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    Aww! Absolutely gorgeous!
    You wrote this so beautifully and compelling, That I could NOT take my eyes off of it for one second!
    AMAZING write! & good luck!

    + Jackie

  • Nighttime angel
    May 28, 2008

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    Excellent take on the prompt. I can relate to this one quite well. I love your poem so much. I could relate to the first 4 lines.

    good luck

    kat


  • SuicidalLover
    May 28, 2008

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    Aaawwwwww. How sad sister.... This has depth of emotion. Truly heartfelt. I wish you luck.
    ~Kystal Angel