When ever I look in the mirror
My decission becomes more clearer
I hurt you I know and I'm Sorry isnt enough
I made life for you too rough
I wonder so much
If I had never let them touch
Would you be so much happier then now
If I could do it I would but Im not sure how
I try to take you in my arms
But the things I do seem to do more harm
I can't seem to make things right
I can't comfort you in the middle of the night
I see you hiding I try to reach out
I can even hear when you scream and shout
From the pain I've caused you
I'm not the one who hurt you that parts true
I let it happen and thats why I take the blame
And hang my head down in shame
I could have been the one
I was there the first time it was done
But I ran and hid after a while
I remember it so much as if I'm still that child
I feel the pain we both took
And his face how scary he looked
I'm sorry this all happened to you
I messed up like I always do
And I know sorry isn't enough to be said
And I know how much you want to be dead
So for you I'll give up this fight
Cause I'll never make it right
Author notes
Credit the pictures owner --Pale_Dreams_for_Color_by_DreamingWingsStudio...from deviantart.com
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Be kinder than necessary, for everyone you meet is fighting some kind of battle!
Comments
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I can feel so much emotion in this and the imagery is very vivid as well. Thanks for posting it for me.
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Gosh I really felt the pain in this..a haunting sadness..even regret
Very well written from the picture, you took it deep and me into your words
Thank you and good luck
Cindy
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Wow twin.... That wasn't your fault!!! Don't you dare think it was. Shit happens and its hard, but never look back. This is deep with emotion of darkness known by little. The few who understand are fragile. I wish you not to break.
The best of luck in life.
Your twin,
Kystal Angel
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love it this is answsome writting
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