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You make my heart stop

Everytime I think of you,
My heart stops and burst,
A million feelings,
And a gazillion toughts,
But a single hope.

Everytime I see your smile,
I cant help but smile back,
And feel the butterfly fly,
And the light tickling,
Just right there in my tummy.

Everytime I hear your voice,
I find myself listening close,
imagination chocolate,
As your words reaches me,
I cant help but want more.

Everytime I hear you sight,
Of happiness I cant do else then smile,
For I am the one,
Who makes you so happy,
And I am happy for that!

But everytime I'm left alone,
My heart is bleeding 'til you come back,
I can not stand to be alone,
For I need you here to hold my hand.

And every night I spend alone,
I feel so cold and find no comfort,
And the pillow is always too hard,
But then I fall a sleep dreaming,
Of you and everything is alright.

Eveytime you look at me,
My heart stops and burst,
A million feelings,
But only one is stronger,
The love I feel for you.

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I picked option; Write about love and how it makes me feel.

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  • daviscth
    July 14, 2008
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    Thanks for giving me the chance to read this again.

  • daviscth
    June 10, 2008
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    You did a wonderful job with this prompt dear. good luck