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Romantically Inept

Mystically incurable, doubts shadow,
drops of sadness span universes,
pain defiling her eyes;
causing ripple effects
of an incurable romantic. 

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20 words
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  • penman gold member
    June 9, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. A great expression of 20 words. Congratulations on your honorable mention.


  • perfectsunset gold member
    May 28, 2008

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    Aww this was so deeply touching, heartfelt and beautiful. Love your take on the prompt, so original. Good luck in the contest


  • SuicidalLover
    May 28, 2008

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    Oh...wow this is deep! I see a winner here...I mean wow with the depth of emotion. It spoke to me...*looks to see if the luny ppl are coming* A great write hun and I wish you the best of luck!
    ~Kystal Angel


  • xCandieKissesx
    May 28, 2008

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    Beautiful piece of art you've written here.
    It reeally does bring the image to life!
    Great job!!

    + Jackie

  • Nighttime angel
    May 28, 2008

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    WOW this is incredible to me. I love the last 2 lines the most. I love your take on the prompt. excellent poem.

    good luck

    kat


  • Nevel
    May 28, 2008

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