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Silver Lingers are Found


Black tears form on alabaster skin,
in one single moment,
they become silver drops of faith.



{Slivers of hope appear}


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20 words
Credit the Artist:
http://heartlesskitty.deviantart.com/art/Tears-from-the-Moon-8431320

A contest entry

What to do in an insane world?

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  • Valley Girl silver member
    May 28, 2008

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    An uplifting take on the prompt. How we can be put in a sad situation but still have a tiny bit of hope. Great take. Best of luck in the contest, thank you for commenting on mine as well.


  • perfectsunset gold member
    May 28, 2008

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    Aww this was so deeply emotional yet beauty that blooms within. Love your imagery and colour- bringing forth great depth and the ending couldn't be more perfect with "{Slivers of hope appear}" ..wonderful take on the prompt & good luck in the contest

    **Thanks for the comment on mine as well


  • xCandieKissesx
    May 28, 2008

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    Wow! Beautifully written indeed!
    It fits the image PERFECTLY!!!
    Excellent job!

    + Jackie


  • MysticalRayne
    May 28, 2008

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    Your work is getting phenomenal ~ this is wounderfully written ~ best of luck in the contest

  • Nighttime angel
    May 28, 2008

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    oohhh I truly love this poem of yours. I love the last 2 lines, especially the last one. excellent take on the prompt.

    good luck

    kat

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