Let's Play Doctor, You be the Patient
We can have some fun today
I'll take you to my working station
And work you in every way
I can mend all your wounds
I'll take away the pain
I can work you all around
Until you have to use a cain
I will check your pulse
And listen to your heart beat
I'll start to kiss your lips
As you start to feel the heat
Next I'll take your blood pressure
And find its much to high
So I'll calm you down
Then you'll whimper why
Then I'll give you a physical
I'll check each section of your body
My lips will be my instrument
Baby don't get haughty
Then I'll see you shiver
I'll keep you nice and warm
I'll comfort you through all weather
I'll be there through the storm
Next I'll find a shocking surprise
You have a broken heart
Then I'll let you know
I loved you from the start
We'll mend your wounds together
I'll heal your broken past
I'll be with you forever
These feelings will never pass
You mean the world to me
My feelings for you are true
I'll be your doctor every day
Just because I love you
Author notes
Dear amanda...hope you like it
A contest entry
- TITLES!!! by AutumnsFlame.
1142 points, ended June 5, 2008, 27 entries
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aww this is soo sweet.
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I happen to like this Poem very much.....It is absolutely wonderous.
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thanx. It is very meaningful to me
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i like this
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This was alright. I like that you used the doctor as a metaphor for a lover. There are some grammar mistakes you may want to fix:
"THen I'll let you know"
"My lipps will be my instrument"
^^^I don't think you meant to do that.
Thank you for entering my contest.
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Yeah i didn't mean to do that. Thanx I fixed it. I am dislexic so I make a few errors like that often. But now that you pointed it out I fixed it. I wrote this for someone very special to me, and this poem means alot to me personally. the meaning is true and I was basing this poem off of real feelings. My gf( we are now on a break IDK why) was hurt badly by her ex, and i found that out, and the poem was me telling her I would be there no matter what. Even though we aren't dating right now I am still true to that and i still care about her.
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I love love love this poem. It's one of my faves. It also gets some ideas going...
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i knew you'd like it lol. And what kinda ideas...?
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Call me and you'll find out.
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i think I already have before, but I can call again. lol
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Anytime baby
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Awww this is very good. I really like this one. It is so full of meaning. This is just awesome. THanks for the read and keep it up!
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thanx. You really like it? It is kinda for a close "friend" of mine. She knows who she is
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