The carrion creatures
of nights despair
swoon in the perfume
of tragedy's decay
awaiting a feast
borne from their famine!
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A contest entry
- Semi Quicky - Dark prompt by Sanguinarius.
900 points, ended May 29, 2008, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Not For The Weak II by Immortal Obscurity.
875 points, ended July 3, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Damn this is dark and twisted, well done
Good luck
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This is a perfect poem for holloween A good poem for that for sure
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This is pretty good, actually, though I wondered if swoon should be swooning.
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I like the idea of famine that you put in as the last word.
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This is beautiful... Wow, this contest will be harder to judge than I thought. Those last two lines are very strong, but 'tragedies' should be 'tragedy's' in the context you've used here. Well done, and good luck.
Laura
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