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barefoot bravery

sneaking back in
early morning birds
singing me a tune

get away with it
until

"honey, where are your shoes?"

lies caught in throat
eyes wide and explanation-less
as my body wafts outside

to find the shoes i left last night
on my front step

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i left my shoes: prompt: free form

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  • Touchof1der silver member
    June 4, 2008

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    Hmmm... now why were they left out on the step? I think perhaps someone was out stepping where they shouldn't have been. Thank you for sharing your words with me and best wishes to in all of your endeavors. Keep that quill dipped in ink and ever ready for use dear poet. Good luck in the contest!
    ♥ Touchof1der