A dream without a name
The one without the fame
You came and hurt me
I wished to be free
You brought in the rain
The tears and the pain
You put between us distance
Yet I kept my persistence
You told me to let my butterfly go
I cried, my healing was slow
You gave me a hug every now and then
I only wanted to know when
I wanted to be left alone
I wanted to be on my own
You wouldn't let that stay true
I could tell when I lied that you knew
You helped me be strong
You helped me along
I may not be fine yet
But I will be soon you can bet
And you're the one to blame
For dousing my destructive flame
Oh how I love you so
My beautiful rainbow
Author notes
I don't really like this one so much xD I just came up with it as I went along, and yes I just now made it. I had to use RhymeZone a few times when I got stuck, too xD
Comments
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A good introspective poem ...
and, also retrospectively, analyzing step by step what went wrong ... And the conclusion is just brilliant: even though I, the persona of this poem, is wounded, I am beginning to heal, and yes:
I love you so
My beautiful rainbow
I always love metaphors like butterfly and rainbow, with its myriad of meanings.
This poem reflected the lovely paradox of gained loss!
Love
Myra
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