Does it hurt?
Yes it does
but do you care?
I have always
been there for you.
No matter the situation.
Where are you today?
When for once
I need you.
I have come to notice
the only friend I have,
is the one that's always
been my true friend.
MY BLADE
The one friend
I can always count on
to be there for me
no matter what.
My destiny is to decieve
and be decieved
while others dwell
on my pain.
Deaths destruction
is key to my insanity
as I dwindle into
NOTHING
Please tell me what you think
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nothingness never
your pain is stretched within these lines, they show also your disapointment in others,,I loved this stanza " My destiny is to decieve
and be decieved
while others dwell
on my pain."
very very well written
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I love it you write such beautiful poems with emotion well done
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powerful
Your poem has strong powerful emotions that have been penned with great ease and feelings-your piece moves fast-the pain ,the hurt, the betrayal are very well depicted-'My destiny is to decieve
and be decieved
while others dwell
on my pain.'-these lines make me feel real sad-a very moving write
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