I left this world
to find a new,
with hopeful words
in a wonderful hue.
I left my troubles
and took flight,
it may be humble
and a wonderful sight.
I take a step in this
bright white light,
An unimaginable
right wing height,
And though the tears
fall down on me,
I've never felt better,
I'm blue, just blue.
I left my heart
to find a new,
another one to start
my way to you,
You know that I flew
right back to you.
And though the tears
fall down on me,
I've never felt better,
I'm blue, just blue.
My audience is true,
it's just blue.
Author notes
I hope this brings you words of encouragement,
we all feel a little blue, but it's just blue.
♥.
A contest entry
- Make me fly or come with me in the dark by subliminal girl.
400 points, ended May 30, 2008, 25 entries
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Comments
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Wow, you used some real nice imagery and your poem had a great flow and rhythm! Really enjoyed the read, thanks for entering my contest with this wonderful uplifting write!
Best of luck! 
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Wonderful
Beautiful beautiful poem <3 I love it very much.
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