Do you see what I see, in the rainbow reflection,
or is it the dark soulless eyes announcing rejection?
Is it the dream of us all to be so carefree
or do all of us deserve of a black destiny?
Whatever your take of the images mirror,
whether upward or downward you have to configure,
each impression a moment, a life's work to tell
going forward into heaven, or backwards to hell.
no matter how we scribe, it is all but a scripture
a cosmic imbalance, given out by a picture
look to yourself for the answer instead
there is more that goes on than you know, in your head!
A contest entry
- Pic Inspired.... by MaMa-2-be-Cindy.
800 points, ended May 30, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Woweee..love your laanguage choice in this, such emotion expressed through your words and feeling the picture too
So well done, thank you so much and good luck
Cindy
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Wow, excellent take on the prompt, after reading your poem, then looking at the picture, I see what you see.
Good Luck in the contest, great poem. -
Nice take on the prompt... and well spoken! Well done.
Ken
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