So far away yet I fell for you,
we said hello then love grew.
At first friends who smiled alot,
the miles between us we forgot.
Voice so sweet on the telephone,
from a friendship love has grown.
At night words whispered so sweet,
loving has made us both complete.
Pull me close as I close my eyes,
in the dark hear long distant sighs.
In each other found what we needed,
danger signs no longer heeded.
Now love fills hearts as we dream,
sending our love across moon beams.
To look in your eyes, feel your touch,
is what we both long for so much.
For now we share our smiles and tears,
face together all our hopes and fears.
Who knows what tomorrow may bring,
for now we love as our hearts sing.
Author notes
CONTEST PROMPT:
I’ve never had the pleasure of looking into his/her eyes or holding his/her in my arms and yet he's/she’s touched me like I’ve never been touched before.
In a list
A contest entry
- Just Follow The Prompt - closes after 15 entries by Touchof1der.
600 points, ended June 19, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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It looks like you have a winning relationship as well as a winning poem. I like the way this poem reads--the your hopes and feelings are plain as day. May the future be kind to you!
~woof
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Perfect! Inspiring, uplifting and just a real "positive" piece to spend the morning opondereing over and opening up to. What a great way to start one's thoughts for the day. I needed this!
I truly enjoyed this piece. Best wishes to you in all of your endeavors and thank you for sharing. Keep that pen handy and ever ready for use dear poet. Good luck in the contest! 
♥ Touchof1der
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Amazing.
I loved this poem. It is filled with so much emotion. I felt what you were feeling. My favorite part was lines 13-16 "Now love fills hearts as we dream,
sending our love across moon beams.
To look in your eyes, feel your touch,
is what we both long for so much." This is an incredible write =)
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Lovely Comment
Thank you for stopping by and reading. Your comment was very nice and most appreciated. Take care. Sandy
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Bravo!
This reminds me of my lady love & I. Beautifully-written.
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Lovely Comment
Good Morning Jaime. So glad it reminded you of your lady love. I hope you are enjoying this wonderful day. Thank you for reading and commenting.
You take care. Sandy
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this is really nice grammy
i love you
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Lovely Comment
Hi sweet granddaughter. I love you too. Thank you for reading and commenting. Hugs and Smiles coming your way.
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Excellent.
A most excellent write indeed. Imagery, rhythm and rhyme are just fine. Again, very well done. Thanks for sharing.
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Great Comment
Good Morning Clovis. Nice to get on and see a lovely comment from you. Thank you for stopping by. I hope all is going well with you. Take care, Sandy
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