are you the girl who fell, unwillingly, unknowingly?
or are you the girl who knew, and just made a big mistake?
when nothing can be reversed, where will you turn?
when your voice has faded, how will you cry out?
are you the girl who just wanted to try, just to see?
or are you the girl who couldn't help herself, addicted?
when lies float to the surface like a poison, how will you live?
when your source of strength is gone, how will you stand?
are you the girl that just wanted to fit in?
or are you the girl who never wanted to be seen?
when there's nothing left for you, how will you breathe?
when you're all alone, who will dry your tears?
I have seen all these things
unimaginable past has brought me
trembling,
kicking and screaming
to..this..place.
and this is what I have become
so let me ask you:...
are you the girl?
Author notes
I wrote this when I was really upset over what happened with my boyfriend, feeling guilty and just feeling sorry for myself. I showed this to my friend, and she wrote back to me. this is what she said:
I am the girl who fell, unwillingly, unknowingly
when nothing can be reversed, you can turn to me
when your voice is faded, I will scream instead
I am the girl who couldn't help myself, afflicted
when lies float to the surface like a poison, I'll mix the antidote
when your source of strength is gone, I will replenish it
I am the girl that just wanted to fit in
when there's nothing left for you, you will still have me
you are never alone, so let me dry your tears
I have seen all the things
your past has brought you
trembling
kicking, screaming
the blood staining your pretty face
this may be what you have become
but I am the girl
who will help you
~*~*~*~
now what do you think of that?
Comments
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This is indeed heartfelt transaction of the sentiments ..I can see the dillema of the life in the verse here..and yes also the pain is seen in the verse which is given in the auther notes..truly a stunning piece is here..well done...
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