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night time storm

Storms fly over disturbing
my childs sleep
the rain trickling down the window pane
lightening strikes and my son he cries
for a mother the pain over whellming
to hard to leave a child crying
to pick him up and sing
softly a sweet lullaby
with angles to take him to heavenly dreams

Dark monsters come out and play
and go bump in the night
dark movements in the shadows
holding my child within my arms
keeping him warm and safe
keeping away from lifes harm

The sun awaken's and shines away the clouds
to wake up next to my child smiling right back at me
his eyes shine as brightly as the sun
making a good day begin
for he is the sun in my life

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  • lilblueeyesmine1978
    June 23, 2008

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    This was great at first i thought that something had happened to the baby. Wonderfully written thanks for entering and I hope to read more fom you soon.