When the sky is crying, listening silent rhythms,
horizon drips in aqua, mirrored in sensuality symbolic,
golden twilight magnetizes inner gales like a dream
tending the sun hurling; intruder in flaky clouds.
The firmament confidences gained in support,
when dusk awakens the mild spaces in silence,
with a true companionship revealing consciousness,
clutching the lives in wild childish soft breezes.
My tears based in aquatic armour, to hear smiling
nature's laughter in zephyr with ultimate whispers.
Author notes
Prompt: Picture
credit the author;
The Sensual World by werol
~Collected from Deviantart
A contest entry
- Quickie- Picture Prompt~ 10 entries/10 lines by perfectsunset.
475 points, ended May 29, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Birdsong by Shya.
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Comments
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This is full of vivid words and descriptive imagery that create a full scene in the reader's mind. Really, the imagery is awesome... you are really skilled with words.
Minor typo: In line one, shouldn't it be "listening to"?
Thanks for entering! -
Wow you have penned such intense imagery and powerful meaning. You expressed your thoughts so beautifully and metaphorically. Combined together, this was a masterpiece! I really enjoyed the vibrance of it as well with "horizon drips aqua"... just lovely!
Thank you for your entry & best of luck
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