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Written In The Rain

 
 
 
Footsteps on the pavement
of silent revery.
Diamond drops with broken dreams
preventing him to see
shattered shards of mirrored glass
reflecting ones own past.
Pushed aside emotions,
this moment could not last.

Corruption - not the forecast, liar seeped through vain.
Excuses bled through lips - lies written in the rain.



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10.Written In The Rain

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    May 31, 2008
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    Too brillant for words


  • chasingwhiterabbits
    May 28, 2008

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    The last line is my favorite part of the poem. However, the rest of it is very good too. I especially like the imagery that you convey.

    Thanks for entering my contest!