Raindrops on my window sill
tears of love that now is still
with memories of those stormy days
when lips were kissed and bodies swayed.
Under rains mantle of hope
our love was a kaleidescope,
laughter sweet and touches fine
meant to be by grand design.
Pledges made and scribbled here
of forever in this sphere
but now the rain is but a trickle
for your love was merely fickle.
Tears I dry and chase away
arms entwined in memories grey
all promises dried by the sun
where once were dreams but now they're done..
Author notes
10. Written in the Rain
In a list
A contest entry
- Titles Contest by chasingwhiterabbits.
690 points, ended May 31, 2008, 10 entries
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Comments
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The second stanza was your strongest point; kudos for managing to use kaleidescope effectively in a poem. I love the rhyme you used, and the overall theme of the poem is nice. And thank you for sticking with the rain imagery!
Thanks for entering my contest!
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