____: Late nights in Mexico
mother fuck you I'm a drunk sereno
Never seen me coming, but either did I
Gabrielle's trumpet on the fly
So break my face
like your alarm clock,
and then
Spin daddy, spin man, spin,
you're in love.
-@-@@@@-@-@-
____: Texas heat, tornado, cows
flying in Jello
your right, I'm wrong, gazuntite
could you pack my bong?
Look out, I'm up, ufo
papercup, it's the dawn
of the dead show me to Smurf village
Fred, and then hand feed me
my highly ordained
bag of Luekemia taco salad.
Then spin daddy spin man, spin, spin for
burning love.
-@-@@@@-@-@-
____ : NewYork hiatus
I met a sister there that was highly
contagious, baby take your drink,
over there. I think I see your shrink
palming despair, holy moly jesus
don't look now it's that gaff
Picasso chick gone mad cow
Give the bitch my back
but she's everywhere, like
Johnny Depp's tights with a tear
Julian Schnobble's wearing a moomu
I'm tongue-ing an olive as if I do too
Please break my fucking face
like your alarm clock,
and then
Spin daddy, spin man, spin,
you're in love
____:
\\\\\
-@-@@@@-@-@
Footsteps
broke glass
up my nose up my ass
turkey baister
cupcakes in
Jasmine shade
washcloth over
a can of glade
suicide tonsils
humped adnoise
Oboises are obesterious
quails & boys
boys & quails
tiny little eggs
pass the snails
smell the air
dare devil
stare devil
devil stare
evil are
are evil
are you
going
to
at
too
rat
do
re
me
fa
so
la
te
S
P
R
I
N
G
Is over there --> Spin daddy, spin man, spin
you're in love
A spinning burning love.
-@-@@@@-@-@
\\\\\
-@-@@@@-@-@-
burning love._____:
burning love.
-@-@@@@-@-@-
\\\\/
-@-@@@@-@-@
Author notes
Written December 25th, 2003
In a list
A contest entry
- Glass 1/2 Empty r Full?"I LOVE DUCKS" by Hell In Harmony.
400 points, ended October 26, 2005, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This was pretty cool. I think that you did a great job on writing this. Thanks for entering. Keep up the great work and best of luck to you in the contest. Take care!
~Cherie -
You're kidding? Well it's about enimas,
and radiation, but in sing song form. -
I also didnt understand , good luck in the contest
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i have to say i didn't really understand the "@" and the "/" things. i didn't understand what was going on but then again, i don't know if you were going for understanding here. there were some really awesome lines in this one.. i loved your opening stanza, it was catchy and clever. -alex
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That's a little confusing, but I like it! Good luck in the contest!
x Jill x -
I painted it.
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good job
an good luck
~Jen~ -
its tight and the image i dig it where did u find it
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