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Show Me

Im in need of sex,
Or maybe love.
But who really cares.
Just show me what you can do.

Help me forget,
For just a while,
Whats really wrong.
Just show me what you can do.

Lay me down,
Or stand me up,
However you like.
Just show me what you can do.

Caress me hips.
Hold me tight.
Kiss my shoulders.
Just show me what you can do.

Tie me up,
Or hold me down,
Pull my hair.
Just show me what you can do.

I dont wanna think.
Dont want to talk.
Not here to remember,
Just show me what you can do.

Author notes

free write turned into a not-so-bad poem

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  • daddy-oh
    July 22, 2008
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  • Lotus-Mama
    May 28, 2008

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    Awesome write, sis... I hate this feeling. Someone save me!!! Take me away...far away from here!
    I love you!


  • Roberts Pet
    May 28, 2008

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    Excellent!

    It is very well written. I love it! I was amazed to get to the authors notes and find this started as a free write!