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Just a face

You were just a nameless face
&& i was just a girl
I never thought id have a shot
&& this one means the world

But now i know your name
&& now you know my face
Im not sure where it will go
or if we'll find a place

To see if we can make it work
or if we have the time
to try && beat the odds
Ill try to make you mine.

I know you've made mistakes
You told me from the start
I wont ask you to change
or just hand over my heart

Im not in love with you
&& your not in with me
but ive got the patience
To wait it out and see

Your not just a face
and im not just a girl
we could take this shot
to share each others worlds

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  • DaScAd
    May 28, 2008

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    its very 'to the point'. I like it. It's what i've been trying to get you to see all along. And i appriciate the thanks but i didnt do a whole lot. You had it in you, still do, i just helped you see it.


  • some skater boy
    May 28, 2008

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    you're never just a girl, and you need to remember that, i love you hun and I'm very proud of you. just be carefull or i'll have to plow you


    • becomingbroken
      May 28, 2008
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      You will plow me? Im not sure if thats a good thing or not! Thank you for the comment babes