Devoted dulcet tones
kiss hands
lovingly creating
a perfect canvas
of submission.
Desperate need thrums
in echoes
of that kiss.
A contest entry
- Quickie 20/10 by fortyninereasons.
525 points, ended May 29, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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beautiful and exciting write, sometimes short and sweet leaves more to the imagination! well done on the trophy was well deserved
xx cheryl
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A perfect canvas of submission.... wowzers, I like that!
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Beautiful write. I liked the ending the best. Lots of passion expressed. Congrats on the honorable trophy.
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Congratulations on your Trophy!
Your words are subtle, yet vivid. Well done!
How are you, Poetess? Good to read you again.
Love
Myra
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Lips makes such sweet music when united in perfect harmony with hands and heart. Congratulations on the HM.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
ps. It's good to see you here again.
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I really like the last stanza. Well done. Juls
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I like the way you have made it full of longing, Nice take. Love, c
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