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They stand were they are and wish on the star
When lovers look to the darken sky
To shine on those you give love
In heavens above
A star was born

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hee! hee!

been done before

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  • movedon
    June 2, 2008
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    Beautiful! Felt like I was with my boyfriend watching the night sky. Great imagery.

    Mylee