A soul is such a beautiful thing,
made with light and purity,
created in love and beauty
and wonderfully radiant.
Your soul can be seen
in your sparkling eyes
and your beautiful smile
that touches my heart.
A soul is incapable
of being diminished
by the results of dna
or the clothing that is worn.
Only one whose own soul
is dimmed or dying
cannot see the beauty
of another persons soul.
So let your soul shine,
and feel pity for those
whose souls wither away
despite the beauty that contains it.
A contest entry
- Redefining. by Number 13.
600 points, ended June 6, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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LOVELY AND INSPIRING!!!!
One should not withdraw but show their heart and soul, to share with others the good things in life, friendship, love and compassion.
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Yeah, beauty is on the inside ♥
More people should realize that.
Great job :]
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Good work dear. I would be happy, if you could spare your time to stamp your impressions on my poems too.
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Paula at her best takes over the soul and sense of the rest. The soul's roll and the rule of the soul are beautifully carved. Sweet lil poem sweet heart.
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I like this. I really, really liked reading this. Nice job.
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Thank you, I am glad that you enjoyed this.
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Wonderful poem, I love the portrayal of the soul in this write. So true and enlightening. Penned with emotion.
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