Watching over you always
I am here; not seen yet you
feel the wind kiss your face;
wiping away loneliness.
I dwell inside my love
that's why your heart
beats so heavy.
Remember I'm just pass
the sunset, golden wings
waiting for your smile.
Author notes
Prompt ~ I may not be able to dry your tears anymore, but we'll always be standing beneath the same sky...
A contest entry
- can you feel me still by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended May 28, 2008, 9 entries
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Comments
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lovely poem ,powerful author notes...prompt... written with your usual deep feelings and flair ,good luck xxxxx
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How beautifully engaging and sincere... x
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Kind of reminds me of the spirit of one's mother watching over them after she has departed.
Beautifully done, Dove, I feel the same way...
I love you,
Brazos
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