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~A Mother's Love is Everywhere~

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reflected in stars,
across a moonlit night

mirrored in sunlight,
warming your heart

distance need not
be the enemy

just look to the sky,
I am but a glance away









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Prompt ~ I may not be able to dry your tears anymore, but we'll always be standing beneath the same sky.

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  • carole21
    May 29, 2008

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    very nice

    very nice sensitive write for the prompt . . liked "distance need not be the enemy" and "I am but a glance away" . . well done


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    May 28, 2008
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    How beautifully touching... x


  • Cannonsfire
    May 28, 2008

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    Awwwww...I know how writing this would have made you feel Love, Chez


  • perfectsunset gold member
    May 27, 2008
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    Aww this was so beautifully expressed and deeply heartfelt. Good luck in the contest