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The Bucket List

I put all my eggs in one basket.
Went sing a-tisket-a-tasket.
But then I thought fuck it,
I'm kicking the bucket,
That bunny is getting it's ass kicked.

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  • ears2hearyou gold member
    May 28, 2008
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    lol.......maybe!

    That was truly funny!
    way to let it out!
    kick that damn bunny wabbit!
    ears/Seattle


  • Justin
    May 28, 2008

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    Haha this was great.I loved it a lot.... it was nice to see rhyming that didn't sound forced at all. Great write, and welcome to all poetry!