I keep my smile away from you
I make sure it is perfectly hidden
So that you won't see
I keep my laughter to myself
Swallowing air every time I have a need
So that you won't hear
I keep my distance from you
To keep your nose from smelling my aroma
So that you won't smell
I keep my lips to myself
Far far away from you
So that you won't taste
I stay as far as possible
A hundred feet away from you
So that you won't touch
This is the easiest way
For me to admire you
So that I won't get hurt
Yet is it possible
That you admire me too?
Do you do as i do?
I'm sure that I admire you
But yet I wonder very often
Do you truly love me?
Author notes
This goes out to "Pepe". It's been a couple of years, but yet I still remember you. Love you so much!
A contest entry
- who you love by Merciful-Manner.
431 points, ended June 7, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I Need new rhyming favorites by piccola.
900 points, ended June 10, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be honest and if it sucks, say it sucks.
Comments
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honest and from the heart. I was looking for "rhyming favorites" and this isn't exactly rhyme but that wasn't a hard and fast rule either I guess. Thank you so much for entering
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omg
amazing write. the imagery is wonderful. i love the verse form. thats my specialty. not many ppl use 3 line stanzas and i think they r the best way to write. i definately know the emotions in here. r u sure ur 14? u shouldnt know abt thiat stuff yet.
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Wow
That is sooo awesome!!!!! very well written
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